Creating Quirky Characters
by Robert and Darrin McGraw
Quirky
characters add spice to a story and can also be used as a source of
tension. In our science fiction novel, Animal Future, we began with the
premise that in the near future, an unexplained phenomenon has caused
some species to become intellectually elevated to the point that they
are classified “provisional humans” and can hold down human jobs.
Although our book is a humorous action-thriller, there is an important
sub-text that asks: Suppose the “Elevation” actually occurred. How can
two very different populations learn to get along with each other? In
real life, this is a vitally serious question, and serious questions can
often be asked most effectively when mixed with humor. That means our
novel needs humorous characters.
We start with a chimpanzee
character, but immediately we have a problem: chimpanzees wearing
clothes are a cliché. We counter that by pushing it a step farther and
making our chimp, Mr. Brian, even more “clothed” than a human would be.
He’s a “bespoke” (custom) gentleman’s tailor with a deep knowledge of
the fashion industry. Naturally, a high-end clothier like Brian wears
high-quality suits, French cuff shirts , and silver cuff links. He
speaks impeccable English and is unfailingly polite. We then put
pressure on those traits when Brian and two humans, Autumn and Mack, go
on the run from terrorists trying to kill them. Having to sleep in a
zoo, go without showering, and sweat profusely while battling to stay
alive will strain anybody’s fastidiousness and courtesy. This means
conflict. Sometimes it’s Autumn and Brian in conflict with Mack; at
other times it’s Brian and Mack in conflict with Autumn.
Brian
also has to learn to appreciate the quirkiness of humans. Mack, a
rough-edged but pragmatic spy with a wisecrack for every situation,
thinks in divergent ways that don’t match Brian’s honest and
conservative nature. This puts pressure on Brian to learn new ways to
solve problems, which he does by learning to change his way of thinking.
Autumn,
the Vietnamese-American policewoman who is fleeing with them, has her
own quirks, among them an interest bordering on reverence for the
cultural history of Vietnam (unlike the rest of her Westernized family,
ironically). Brian, however, is an entrepreneur who looks very much to
the future. As an “elevated” Provie, he has little sense of the history
of his species, and therefore can’t understand or appreciate Autumn’s
dedication to the past. We put pressure on this trait by having Brian
switch identities with a chimp employee at the zoo. There Brian begins
to see that it can be helpful to know how things worked in the past if
you are trying to deal with the problems of the present.
As a
chimpanzee, Brian has stupendous latent physical strength and
aggression. Ironically, he has to be encouraged by the humans to get in
touch with his ape side and be less cerebral and more physical. This
leads him to take the actions that eventually make him a hero.
In short, in this example we build up the quirkiness of the character by
- Making the character’s traits more extreme
- Giving the character conflicting traits
- Giving the character traits that go against the typical expectation
- Placing the character in situations and with other characters who test or strain those traits
The
next time you deal with a real life person whose quirkiness is
irritating or downright maddening, just remind yourself, “Hey, I can use
this in my next book!”
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Animal Future
(Book 1)
- New Cover!
In
this quirky, thoughtful, action-filled novel, a female cop, a
well-dressed chimpanzee, and a spy are on the run from shadowy assassins
armed with machine guns, drones, missiles, and two-inch fangs.
Since
the mysterious Elevation of animal intelligence, San Diego has been
flooded with immigrant animals and society has changed. Officer Autumn
Winn wants to leave the Tactical Assault squad and become an expert on
her Vietnamese heritage. But first she has to prove she’s not guilty of
murdering her partner. To do that, she has to rescue the kidnapped wife
of the chimpanzee tailor Mr. Brian.
In the process she is forced
to cooperate with Mack Davis, a good-looking but smart-mouthed operative
trying to stay alive long enough to retrieve his digital wristband with
its vital data, and also discover the secret of a jade figurine he just
transported from Singapore.
As they race to find Brian's wife,
the trio must navigate a colorful landscape of characters including a
comical pair of ferrets; a wealthy human socialite; a chimpanzee
paramilitary commander; and Urizen, the deranged king of underground
intelligence in Southern California.
(Watch for Animal Future - Book 2 to be published in November.)
[MA: WHEEEEEEE!]
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Author BIOs: Robert McGraw and Darrin McGraw
Robert
McGraw has had several professions, but his most difficult job is
convincing his wife he's actually working even when he's just staring
out the window. He is the author of numerous magazine and newspaper
articles, as well as three books. Two of his television scripts won
awards from the International Television Association.
A former
professional symphony musician who spent several years playing for the
Cape Town Symphony in South Africa, Robert has a Master's degree in
Education and completed the work (all but dissertation) for a Ph.D. in
music. He also studied art at The Ruth Prowse School of Art in Cape Town
and creates visual art in a variety of styles. His works are
represented in the collection of the International Museum of Collage,
Assemblage and Construction in Santa Fe, New Mexico.
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Darrin
McGraw grew up more or less in a succession of libraries. He is pleased
to note that the New York Public Library has a McGraw Rotunda, though
he cannot actually take credit for this. He graduated from Stanford
University and earned a Ph.D. in English from UCLA. After working in
online software development he served for eight years as the writing
director of the Culture, Art and Technology program at UC San Diego.
Besides
writing and reading he has many other interests including early music,
alternative architecture, and woodworking. When scientists have finished
cloning the woolly mammoth he has a few other extinct species to
suggest, including Cleopatra and Dr. Samuel Johnson.